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Chapter 21 Grammar
Parallel Structure (RL)
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Correct the parallel structure error: The mechanic checked my belts and then was looking to see if the fluid levels needed to be topped off. | The mechanic checked my belts and then looked to see if the fluid levels needed to be topped off. |
Correct the parallel structure error: The position description indicated that the job called for an applicant who was courteous, dependable, and who was also hardworking. | The position description indicated that the job called for an applicant who was courteous, dependable, and hardworking. |
Correct the parallel structure error: During her evening study time Michelle read three chapters of a novel for English, completed 100 practice Algebra equations, and was beginning her essay for History 101. | During her evening study time Michelle read three chapters of a novel for English, completed 100 practice Algebra equations, and began her essay for History 101. |
Correct the parallel structure error: Lesa planned to end her relationship with Barry because he treated her cat poorly, unambitious, and smelly. | Lesa planned to end her relationship with Barry because he was mean to her cat, unambitious, and smelly |
Correct the parallel structure error: During summer vacations I like traveling with my family, to spend time on my writing portfolio, and to laze around the house. | During summer vacations I like traveling with my family, spending time on my writing portfolio, and lazing around the house. |
Correct the parallel structure error: Halogen bulbs may cost more, but they burn brighter, environment saving, and last longer. | Halogen bulbs may cost more, but they burn brighter, save the environment, and last longer. |
Correct the parallel structure error: The doctor was patient, demonstrated kindness toward his patients, and soothing to be around. | The doctor was patient, kind, and soothing to be around. |
Correct the parallel structure error: Dogs are excellent pets due to their companionship and also they provide protection. | Dogs are excellent pets because they make good companions and provide protection. |
Correct the parallel structure error: Albert’s specialty was repairing commercial ovens and restoration of older ovens. | Albert’s specialty was repairing commercial ovens and restoring older ovens. |
Correct the parallel structure error: My sister keeps her older car on the road by changing the oil often and repairs minor problems quickly. | My sister keeps her older car on the road by changing the oil often and repairing minor problems quickly. |
Correct the parallel structure error: Programs devoted to news, science programs, and professional hockey games are all that Brad watches on TV. | News programs, science programs, and professional hockey games are all that Brad watches on TV. |
Correct the parallel structure error: At Girl Scout camp, Caroline learned how to row a canoe and cooking over a camp fire. | At Girl Scout camp, Caroline learned how to row a canoe and cook over a camp fire. |
Correct the parallel structure error: Because she had broken a plate, hit her head on the cabinet door, and the frozen pizza had burned, Kristen decided to call for pizza delivery. | Because she had broken a plate, hit her head on the cabinet door, and burned the frozen pizza, Kristen decided to call for pizza delivery. |
Correct the parallel structure error: A strong breeze and water that was calm made the day perfect for sailing. | A strong breeze and calm water made the day perfect for sailing. |
Correct the parallel structure error: The sign on the bus window proclaimed, “Mass transit: good for seniors, students, jobs, and tourism”. | The sign on the bus window proclaimed, “Mass transit: good for seniors, students, workers, and tourists”. |
Correct the parallel structure error: Under the sofa there was a dusty potato chip, two quarters, and an old pair of sunglasses was also there. | Under the sofa there was a dusty potato chip, two quarters, and an old pair of sunglasses. |
Correct the parallel structure error: Everyone experiences stress, regardless of gender, race, or what age the person is. | Everyone experiences stress, regardless of gender, race, or age. |
Correct the parallel structure error: Stress in a person’s life can cause a person to feel anger, having nightmares, or to gain or lose weight, among other responses. | Stress in a person’s life can cause a person to feel anger, have nightmares, or gain or lose weight, among other responses. |
Correct the parallel structure error: For most people coping with stressful situations, after a period of adjustment, the effects of stress fade and are seen to disappear. | For most people coping with stressful situations, after a period of adjustment, the effects of stress fade and disappear. |
Correct the parallel structure error: Stress in response to negative events is more serious and causing more harm than the stress over a minor decision. | Stress in response to negative events is more serious and causes more harm than the stress over a minor decision. |