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| Question | Answer |
|---|---|
| whats 1? | NO PASSIVE VERBS NO “ING” “IS” and “ARE” |
| whats 2? | INTERNAL EMOTIONS IN ACTION/DIRECTION |
| whats 3? | HISTORY OR BACKSTORY IN ACTION DIRECTION |
| whats 4? | CAMERA DIRECTION IN YOUR SCRIPT |
| whats 5? | UNNECESSARY TRANSITIONS |
| whats 6? | UNNECESSARY DIRECTION (STAGING) |
| whats 7? | FADE IN ON THE RIGHT SIDE OF THE PAGE FADE IN: SHOULD BE <- |
| whats 8? | FADE OUT ON LEFT SIDE OF THE PAGE FADE OUT: SHOULD BE -> |
| whats 9? | ANY CHARACTER BEING “TYPICAL” |
| whats 10? | OVERLOADING PARENTHETICALS |
| whats 11? | PUTTING PARENTHETICAL ON SAME LINE AS DIALOGUE |
| whats 12? | OVERWRITING SCENE HEADER |
| whats 13? | PUTTING LOWER CASE IN SCENE HEADER |
| whats 14? | NOT CAPITALIZING SFX, FX, IMPORTANT PROPS OR FIRST APPEARANCE OF A CHARACTER IN ACTION LINE.SUMMARIZING EVENTS…THEY EAT SUPPER, TALK FOR A WHILE, SPEND SOME TIME TOGETHER, THEN Ex: WWII HAPPENS AND THEN… |
| whats 15? | PAST TENSE IN ACTION/DIRECTION EVER |
| whats 16? | BEGINS OR STARTS (UNLESS THE ACTION WILL BE INTERRUPTED) |
| whats 17? | REVEALS/REVEALING, AMATEURISH–LIMIT! |
| whats 18? | ACTING WITH EYES! “THEIR EYES LOCK. SHE STARES, HE GLANCES, HE LOOKS AT HER ANGRILY…. |
| whats 19? | LONG CHUNKS OF TEXT/LONG CHUNKS OF DIALOGUE (COROLLARY TOO MANY LINES OF TEXT OR DIALOGUE IN A ROW WITHOUT A BREAK) (PLEASE FOLLOW THE FOUR/FIVE LINE RULE!) |
| whats 20? | WAKE UP SCENES / EATING SCENES THAT DON’T DO ANYTHING…(ANY SCENE THAT DOESN’T DO ANYTHING REMEMBER THOMAS THE TANK ENGINE! |
| whats 21? | ENTRANCES AND EXITS (AT THE BEGINNING AND END OF SCENES) THIS ISN’T A PLAY (COME IN LATE, LEAVE EARLY!) |
| whats 22? | SAYING IN THE DIRECTION WHAT THE CHARACTER IS ABOUT TO SAY. |
| whats 23? | ON THE COVER SHEET GET RID OF THE BITS YOU ARE NOT USING! IT’S DISRESPECTFUL TO LEAVE THEM THERE! |
| whats 24? | NUMBERING SCENES (THAT’S SOMEONE ELSE’S JOB!) |
| whats 25? | WE OR YOU IN ACTION/DIRECTION. |
| whats 26? | SUMMARIZING EVENTS…THEY EAT SUPPER, TALK FOR A WHILE, SPEND SOME TIME TOGETHER, THEN WWII HAPPENS AND THEN… |